Adhore Sapne

by Jyoti Rawat   Sep 5, 2011


Ek khawab, jisse ho gayee mulakaat
jeevan se sunder hai woh
kartaa meree har khwaaish ko sach

kho gaye usmein hum is tarah
pata nahi kab woh ankho se fislaa
yeh bhi na jana kab suraj niklaa

Har raat ko neendo mein kho jate hai
apne khwabo ko pura karne ke liye
Rastaa nahi miltaa manjil ka

na poore na adhoore mere sapne
mujh mein hee simat jate hai
ek khwaaish ban jate hai

mere adhoore sapne, mere apne
har raat ko mehkaa jate hai
jeene ki ek nai rah dekha jate hai

mere adhore sapne

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  • 11 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    YOUR WORDS ARE YOUR HEART.
    "na poore na adhoore mere sapne"----24 carat gold line.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Well

    Thank for your comment.

    I am bad in english I love writing but my english is not good i rearly upload here.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    What can I say? This poem is so difficult to understand since I don't know this language other than nahi=no.

    But the structure of each stanzas caught my attention. I hope to see the English version.

  • 13 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Very soothing, nicely written poem indeed.

    all the best and take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Dekhne se sapne suchh kahaa hote hain???
    HUm insaan unhe suchh karne k liye.. Sapnon k dahleej tak jaate hain aur dil k darwaaze pe dastak diye bagair khaali haath waapiz laut jaate hain...:)

    Nyc poem... I think u hav 2 restructure d poem... Not necessary, just a suggestion..n werz d english version of it? Gudd one

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