by amanda Sep 5, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
She laughs |
by BlueJay
This has a lot of hidden symbolism, to me at least. I think you have done a great job. There is some excellent imagery and a nice simple flow. YOur choice of words is great. You have done a fantastic job with the emotion in this piece. Though I am sorry that you feel or felt this way. |