Comments : My Last Breath

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Wow girl.
    I LOVE it<3.
    Such strong deep raw emotion, wanting to only spend it with him. & with your last breathe, tell him how you feel to let him know how much he means to you.

    I can say I love you everyday
    But when it's my last; I mean it the most
    I wouldn't want to leave this world
    Without you with me close
    With my last breath, I'll make it my best
    To say that I was truly blessed
    I'd rather die in your arms
    Cause only your tears can warm my heart

    This screams pour true emotion.

    Keep writing girl,
    you're amazing!
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Owner of an Untamed Heart

    Thanks