Comments : His Vanishing Act

  • 13 years ago

    by lOsT sOuL

    This is really a sad poem.. but i love it .. it's so clear.. everything is perfect in it ..
    Be he far
    be he near
    time heals up everywhere.
    It comes to us
    when we settle here,
    beyond our dreams
    beyond time
    to our graves
    in eternity.

    I love this Stanza it says so many things.... really this was a great piece of work..:) 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Which will prevail
    (good or evil),
    the side of darkness
    or the lightness that
    brings us back in time?

    loved that stanza, which one will bring us back.

    Amazing job girl <3
    5/5