I loved this poem! I think my fav line in this is "I feel this love slipping through my fingers, hating how the silence lingers." That line is very powerful and adds a deep emotion to the poem. I liked how you described the feelings and not just said them. Makes the poem more powerful. Nice job. :)

Nice poem. Sometimes it does take time for us to realize something. Thoguht this was expressed well through that. :)