Wow... Really good and such strong emotion in ur words u can really feel the projection :) 5/5

I like the rhythm and flow of this poem... I find it the hardest thing to do in poetry to make it flow so well! Well Done I like it :) I know how it feels to try your hardest to change yourself for this person that just doesn't see how much you try and still reject and hurt you...5/5

Cute and this happens to everyone in there life times and im thankfull it hasn't happened to me yet

I like the feelings in this poem because they are really strong and powerful, I also think that this poem flows well and that the rhymes are nice but the blank lines are a bit confusing. You described the situation well and I was able to follow your thoughts, the conclusion you came to finished this poem really well.

Good. :)

I really loved this. The flow was excellent this time and so much power in the words. It's also something very relatable. This piece is bound to go far. A very good poem. You have a talent, don't let anyone tell you different. Keep writing. I can't wait to see more. :) 5/5

I liked this for many reasons, your rhyme theme was great, wording simple yet done with conviction. But most of all I liked the determination of making it right or moving on. I think we try too hard sometimes and in return only hurt ourselves.. Good job

Connie

I could have presented this well written poem to my ex and it would have fit

I love this one! It's simple but stunning. Good word choice and nice rhyme scheme. You're really good at taking your emotion/feelings and making something so beautiful that many people can relate to. (: 5/5

I think we all feel that way in a relationship at least once in our lifes...... I think you captured the exact wordings perfectly. I know I've felt that way off and on in my relationship. I just never knew how to express it and I think you just did that.