Wow... Very very good :)
wondering if someone will help me from above
- love this :)
Tears of pain run down my cheek,
wishing I was able to hold the one I seek.
-Awesome :) and I can relate :)

I can't take this anymore, you've won,
Tears run down my cheek, as I hold this gun.
- I love this too :)
It's all so very good :) 5/5

Ur always a gd writer :) 5/5

Good poem I can relate exactly! As I hold this gun.. I've done that before. I feel ya :/