This kinda makes me scared... Things like that do scare me deep at night... I loved how u described everything and perfect words great flow all in all I loved it :) 5/5

I have to admit that I think this poem belongs into another category because it has a dark touch, that is a bit frigthening. Nevertheless is this a well written poem though.

What a chilling picture you painted :-) I hate the wind and here we get it really bad along with dust storms lol

Awesome write, I'm adding you to my favs cause this was brilliantly done