by miss tanner Jun 23, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I know u don't care but i gotta tell u how i feel~ feelings of being invisible it seems so unreal~ unreal for u to not acknowledge someone u once loved~a love that broke so many promises when push came to shove~shoved into a corner cold and alone~alone cause your gone your true colors have been shown~showing your deceitfulness and lack of common sense~ sense to know u broke my heart and caused tears to fall so dense~ dense enough to fill an ocean or a sea~a sea of uncontrollable emotions that u ave to me~me the one u promised to always be there for~for thick and thin heaven and hell for less and for more~more and more i hurt to think of what we had~ had to tell u how i felt it couldn't be summed up as sad~ sad that u won't even attempt to be a friend~a friend which i deserve for all we went through begging to end~an end which i except we will no longer be together~together we should at least be civil to one another~ another time u will tell me how much I've changed~changed into someone so different and strange~ strange how i thought what we had would last~last much longer than any relationship in the past~the past is all i have left to hold~holding on to a hope that is to bold~boldness in |
Wow you are a very talented writer u really touched me startin with the first couple lines.....keep up the good work hun!! |
by miss tanner
hey this is "miss tanner" please give me any comments and/or suggestions but pleez no haterz ; ) thnx |