Comments : Beyond Repair

  • 13 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    Nice poem :)
    I like the selection of words you have used. I think the flow is ok...
    on the last line is it meant to be Bearing? I think you have earned a 5/5 :) good write

  • 13 years ago

    by The Po whet

    I wouldn't have missed to read this.
    From the title 'beyond repair' one is drawn in to unravel its' meaning.
    The words were well arranged and the flow was perfect.
    Definately one of my favourite from you.

  • 13 years ago

    by Liliana

    I agree with Crystal, the selection of words is good and for sure 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by lonerbabe

    Good poem good choice of words and nice name well done keep up the good work love reading your poems :)

  • 13 years ago

    by catherin

    Really nice poem...words placed correctly,emotions are just perfect..loved it.:-)..

  • 13 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Brother Joseph dude, this poem you got is great. Theres a balance of words here, light and heavy stuff. Very interesting from start to finish. All in all, good work brother, amazing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    I agree with the people that commented before, your choice of words is really good. I also thought that you described the situation well because I was able to follow your thoughts. You definitely have your way with words, well done.