by Sparkling snow flake
Nice poem :) |
by The Po whet
I wouldn't have missed to read this. |
by Liliana
I agree with Crystal, the selection of words is good and for sure 5/5 |
by lonerbabe
Good poem good choice of words and nice name well done keep up the good work love reading your poems :) |
by catherin
Really nice poem...words placed correctly,emotions are just perfect..loved it.:-).. |
Brother Joseph dude, this poem you got is great. Theres a balance of words here, light and heavy stuff. Very interesting from start to finish. All in all, good work brother, amazing. |
by Jenni
I agree with the people that commented before, your choice of words is really good. I also thought that you described the situation well because I was able to follow your thoughts. You definitely have your way with words, well done. |