I though that was beautiful ... the air to sweet to breath ... beautiful 5/5 x

You've picked a very suitable title for the poem. I adore the powerful punch in your every pieces, Melissa. The slight sarcasm always provides a potent thought to ponder about. :D

Short but so poignant, I always enjoy my trips across the internet to your poetry enclave, your poetry often touches me in places so close to home, as is the case with this, Beautifully penned.

Man I wish I could write like this! The way you give life to the most mundane things simply by wrapping them in your perfect words.