Melody

This is one of my favorite from you. I've read it a few times and never had time to comment. I think it's beautiful and simple, but has so much emotion and really says so much more than a lot of your pieces. I think this is almost dreamy feeling and allows the reader to sink their toes into it, a sense of comfort. I like the use of dusty and dusky.. but the one part that tripped me up was 'banal love'. "Banal" sounds like such an ugly word (lol) for the rest of the tone of this piece. Point being it's too pretty for a weird sounding word ;)

I like your title, it fits perfectly with the poem but isn't boring. It caught my eye and set the tone immediately. Great write :)

I can only say how lucky I am to have found your opetry this night. I have enjoyed reading each one so far. They are jewels in my opinion. I can find some of my own style in them. Nicely done - bravo again.

Noura, My dearest, amazing piece this is.
Just so original and worded brilliantly, oh my gosh, I am speechless, this was beautiful.
Loved it.
Tara
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Wow..just loved every word of it..i wish i could give more..but just 5 to give..

I love it when people mix music and poerty it fits so well ... love it noura x