Comments : Finally found the right words...

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I relate to this girl<3.
    Love this poem, wanting to be with him & not sure why, but him being the only thing you've truly wanted.
    Emotion pours through. Good Job 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by My Other Side

    Very nicely written. I do like to read lost love poems. There is always such emotion carried in the words just as you have done hear. I can only imagine. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Well placed.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    I guess it all was just an illusion...
    and I was stuck in that one moment of time...a time
    when everything was certain.

    like this part...good job:=)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    I love the title, it is what originally drew me in. I loved this poem because I can relate to it. The words you have chosen are perfect. :)