This is super awesome and really good... I loved it an such emotion it's so sad I wanna cry... Great poem :) 5/5

Awww this was so sad great writing tho 5/5

Wow i love it !
i can relate <3
so sad and beautiful ... 5/5 great !

Shes a ticking time bomb,
bottling it all up,
holding back every single tear,
fighting to stay alive,
to show everybody this doesn't bother her,
when deep down inside,
death is the only way out for her agonizing pain.

Wow, perfectly written! I loved the whole poem! Good work my friend! Keep it up! So much emotion!!