by Joseph Boadi Sep 7, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I have searched and ploughed but we |
This is deep and good,sad but i loved it and i enjoyed reading it it's a great poem :) :) absolutely fantastic and it's worded so well :) :) 5/5 |
by Burning Angel
I really Like this poem alot :) i give it 5/5 :) amazing job |
I strongly empathize with you!! |
by Jenni
The emotions in this poem are strong and touching, I think it was a good idea to keep the content of the last sentence till the poem ends, that way the reader is captivaed throughout the poem. The rhymes don't seem forced which I rarely see and I think you penned a good poem here. |