A nicely written poem...don't know y people din considered...!keep it up....I would love it if u read and comment my poems as well...:)

Wow this is amazing. There is a flow, imagery, story, emotion, and point of view, all of which are key for writting a good poem. Nice job and I hope to see more really soon!

Emotion, darkness, entwined throughout the words.

Great work hope to read more.