Aw Jenni I really love this so much. what a awesome job you did . It's going in my favorites :-)

Connie

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I loved this! I wish I passed by it earlier, I would nominate it but oh my bad I always leave such great poems unnominated and that sucks! that must suck yes yes YES and I may seem crazy with my long little comment but ohhh blame me not because I love this crazy impressive piece of yours omg Jenniii, you had me wowing while reading it and now what ??
what should I comment?? great poem fantastic I love you marry me and so what??? what's next ha???
and ughhh are you serioussssss???
the sky starts and stops !!!??
omg you must be insane or genius and the second option is what I mean!!
and LOL ahahahahahhahaahahha
I want to steal this poetry tho I'm too honest to :P but yeah whatever! who wouldn't crave to steal it bahahah ok I'm a silly billy now and making no sense but I mean THIS: you are awesome!!!!

"What does the sky look like,
that is now above you?
Where the sun shines down
on you, guiding us.
Where does your sky start
and where does it stop?"

this stanza gave me chills and ahs and ohs and wows and grrrs and fffffssss and omggsss and everything! where did you get this from!? confess now, you little german impatient funny teacher :P hahahaha WHERE!?
CONFESS!

"You made me learn
to ladle strength, out of
things that my heart sees.
The thrill that titillates me
whenever you are there."

this had such a tone such a simile such a passion such a omgggg
NOMINATED THE NEXT WEEK
AM IN LOVE
AM IN LOVE!

I'm sorry I hadn't come across this or maybe I did but didn't comment.
I won't leave a massive comment because Im short of words at the moment. Actually I will just say that this surprised me because it wasn't what i was expecting.

Loved the last stanza.
love Tara

Well jeni i love this so much the last stranza was the best come walk with me beautiful 5/5 one of your best writes i think :D

Very nice...I really liked the line: Where does your sky start
and where does it stop?

It give me the feeling of being connected, yet expansiveness

I got already in love for the the title untill I read the poem, nice job Jen :)

Everything has been said, what else could I say without being repetitive? I love it! Great job as usual and very excellent job.

Wut a great poem:) ur writings r amazing:) keep writing:) ofc 5/5:)

The title, girl, it doesnt get awesomer than that, I love it. As for the whole poem, yeah, the whole love thing can be very predictable at times cause hey, what else can we say in a love poem, but hey, this one, what you did here keeps the reader very interested in what youre saying and somehow feel what your feeling, it all comes down to that and you did it perfectly my friend. Bottomline, its one amazing poem. :D

My best part....

I'm walking this road,
that may lead me best
to what I aim for, but
obstacles keep appearing.
They encourage me
not to give up.

you simply are the best

I find this poem intriguing, different and powerful in many ways.

"Where does your sky start
and where does it stop?"

"If it reaches far enough
does the ocean between us
even matter?"

Did you intend to repeat the above 2 lines, or would you want to put them in with slight variations?
Ex:
1) Does your sky start
where my sky ends?"

2)If I reach far enough does the ocean between us even matters?

Just a different perspective.

I really like this one.
:)
Well worded and sweet.
5/5

Absolutly Beautiful .
:)
Flawless.
Perrrrrfffeeecccttt.
5/5!
Jesssi

"Without you my road
seems vague..
and if you listen carefully
you may hear it beating
ceaseless."

My favorite stanza out of this amazing poem, Jenni.

5/5

-Heather

I like it it has great purpose and has great meaning great work

I loved this the most
"Where does your sky start
and where does it stop?
If it reaches far enough
does the ocean between us
even matter?"
Very sweet poem :)

My starts at shot of watchin u smile.:-)

Very enduring and sweet indeed.

I guess it was beginners luck that I picked this as your first poem I read. Theres nothing i can add to all of the totally on target comments already noted. This was a beautiful use of words. Thank you.

Awww very good :] great writing!