Let It Snow

by Meme   Sep 7, 2011


It was snowing that night, or
perhaps I was frozen in time,
I can't tell anymore. All I can
recall are the scars, the bruises
and the broken heart.

I was just a page in his life, he
once wrote me on that page,
but he forgot to erase me before
he ripped me off.

He just threw me away, I was
awaiting there, torn apart,
anticipating to be picked by
another book.

Days went by, but I'm still left on
that dusty floor, until the wind
blew me away to the arms of a
new book, a book called "You".

You have taken this crinkled
heart of mine, and put in a new
page that only you can read.
I was once a page in his book,
but you have made me all the
pages in yours.

It was snowing that night, or
perhaps I was frozen in time,
once again, I can't tell anymore.
But it took me a while to realize
that I have fallen in love.

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© Copyright 2011 by: gIrL
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  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow, girl, this poem is amazing! I loved it - and I loved how you compared yourself to a page in a book... and your metaphors were beautifully painted... I loved the repetition of the first two lines in the last stanza, it really made it stand out more. And I love that it has a happy ending =) it made it very sweet!

    I just have a few grammar suggestions, that if you change it will be absolutely perfect!

    "I cant tell anymore. All I can" >> change to can't

    "Days went by, but am still left on" >> change to I am or I'm

    And just the can't in the last stanza.. that's all !

    Great job hon - really loved it!

  • 13 years ago

    by yogi73

    It's nice to read a happy love poem. a well written one at that. good job

  • 13 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Hey diz onez simply awsum, awsum n awsum, cannot find ryt words... Simply superb diz one...

    So many diamonds r dumpd as coal stones.... Alwys tru ppl r betrayd, hurt, ignord, lied to... Used..... N tru lingerin in dustbins, wilderness, isolation.... Until u find d eyz of anoder diamond lyk d subject in diz masterpiece poem n dat diamond vl recognize d diamond in u..... N u discover ur self n ur dreamz turn tru awl of a sudden.... Lyf may b strange but not above d miracles of GOD....:) evry broken lyf getz a tru purpose n meaning 2 live... But only after undergoin pain n so many sacrifices...... Luvd diz one though endings r tragic most of d tymz... Buy thank God diz one had d best end it deservd...:) keep it up, really c I alwyz told... U r gettin better n better wid evry write! Keep it up...:)...;)

  • 13 years ago

    by aanika R I P

    Looooooooved this stanza :)

    "Days went by, but am still left on
    that dusty floor, until the wind
    blew me away to the arms of a
    new book, a book called "You"."

    awesome write.... :)

  • 13 years ago

    by aanika R I P

    Looooooooved this stanza :)

    "Days went by, but am still left on
    that dusty floor, until the wind
    blew me away to the arms of a
    new book, a book called "You"."

    awesome write.... :)

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