I love this!! The emotion is excellent! The flow is spectacular. I love love love the message.. The beginning is interesting the end stunning. Your choice of words is amazing. Fabulous job!! 5/5 for sure

So true you are an amazing person(:
i love this poem girl!
you go!
who cares what anybody thinks, it only matters what you think.
i agree with her:)
Awesome piece :)
5/5

So nice to know that someone can admit that the child in us is still there. It should never die. if it dies, we would be corpses to the society. A nice cheerful poem. Some recognized quotes to match your thoughts below:

In every real man a child is hidden that wants to play. ~Friedrich Nietzsche

Happy is he who still loves something he loved in the nursery: He has not been broken in two by time; he is not two men, but one, and he has saved not only his soul but his life. ~G.K. Chesterton

The great man is he who does not lose his child's-heart. ~Mencius, Book IV

When you're green you're growing, and when you're ripe you start to rot. ~Ray Kroc

Adults are obsolete children. ~Dr. Seuss

A grownup is a child with layers on. ~Woody Harrelson

The end of childhood is when things cease to astonish us. When the world seems familiar, when one has got used to existence, one has become an adult. ~Eugene Ionesco

Some things can only be understood when you're in a tree house. With a pile of warm chocolate chip cookies. And a book. ~Dr. SunWolf

Dont let this innocence go ...5 from me too

This poem, is amazing,
Everyone has child like in them, just takes one special person to bring it out.
Or you never loose it. :)
Awesome work. I give you a 5