by NightFlyer Sep 8, 2011
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Take this path unto the sea |
by retha
The unknown made you reap the seeds you have sown within the darkness of its light you have met the shadow you lost during that long night. And she said I would love you as I loved him. |
by vip
Lovely poem! |
by Kiko
This is a nice idea for a poem, and the language and meter were pretty good. However, I found the simple rhyming pattern to be a bit monotonous after a while. Just rewriting this with a slightly more complex rhyming pattern could make a big difference imo. |
by nouriguess
You are not only imaginative or....creative..you also pen your imagination and creation the perfect way. This is worth a front page win. |
by Meena Krish
What a lovely read that was surrounded by darkness and then broken up by the touch of a light..loved the feeling this poem gave..very nice! |