What an easy read the flow was perfect but your wording was the star. I so enjoyed each line that I couldn't pick one. A great piece of work

Connie

I liked it. The imagery was good because of the wording. It flowed nicely from beginning to end. It is a nice length. The only suggestion I have is that you split up the 1 stanza into 2, 3 maybe even 4 stanzas. Other then that it is great.

gave it a 5/5

Karla said it all. Perfectly flawless

Thank you for all your kind comments. This poem evolved from an eerie dream I had of walking thru a dark forest and a moonlit walk I took in my hometown...

What a lovely read that was surrounded by darkness and then broken up by the touch of a light..loved the feeling this poem gave..very nice!

You are not only imaginative or....creative..you also pen your imagination and creation the perfect way. This is worth a front page win.

This is a nice idea for a poem, and the language and meter were pretty good. However, I found the simple rhyming pattern to be a bit monotonous after a while. Just rewriting this with a slightly more complex rhyming pattern could make a big difference imo.

Lovely poem!

The unknown made you reap the seeds you have sown within the darkness of its light you have met the shadow you lost during that long night. And she said I would love you as I loved him.