Calm Day

by Brittany C   Sep 8, 2011


Glittering droplets of water
fall from light grey clouds.

Landing upon me,
gently kissing my skin,
clinging to my hair.

Cleaning the air,
now smelling sweet.
It calms my mind.

A breeze gently moves
around me, cooling.

The sun peaks through
at me; smiling down.

Colors form across the sky
creating a full rainbow.

Beautiful calm day.
Nothings in a hurry.

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  • 13 years ago

    by zaher mosa

    Nice ... I love your poem

  • 13 years ago

    by curtis kotrch the silent tears of of my heart

    Wow!!!! its just like wow lol ur a 10/10!!!!!! keep it up!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Beautiful is this calm day.
    nothings in a hurry.
    - this is soooo great i loved it
    Glittering droplets of water
    fall from light grey clouds.
    - this i think is my favorite

    Then the sun peaks through,
    at me, smiling down.
    Colors form across the sky
    creating a full rainbow.

    - though i don't like it too much its still my favorite :) :)
    the poem was awesome :) 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    I really like this poem!
    it flows nicely and the imagery is really good

    5/5 i gave it
    i feel calmer already

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