Comments : Calm Day

  • 13 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    I really like this poem!
    it flows nicely and the imagery is really good

    5/5 i gave it
    i feel calmer already

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Beautiful is this calm day.
    nothings in a hurry.
    - this is soooo great i loved it
    Glittering droplets of water
    fall from light grey clouds.
    - this i think is my favorite

    Then the sun peaks through,
    at me, smiling down.
    Colors form across the sky
    creating a full rainbow.

    - though i don't like it too much its still my favorite :) :)
    the poem was awesome :) 5/5

  • Wow!!!! its just like wow lol ur a 10/10!!!!!! keep it up!!

  • 13 years ago

    by zaher mosa

    Nice ... I love your poem