Flattering Raven(collab)

by Joseph Boadi   Sep 8, 2011


Tears astreamed from my heavy eyes
As his fiery burnt my ending cries
Are you sure you're not a matron from heaven
Our anniversary lands on a lucky seven
How can i have someone so perfectly amazing
Making my heart beat faster than a flattering raven
You're everything more i'd never be
One i would gladly sacrifice for with ease
As we lay side by side,intertwining our hands together
Am looking forward to a happy ever after
You, becoming my life
And i,willingly your wife

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  • 12 years ago

    by Gemma Wingbuckle

    This is soooo a vivid poem! great job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Wonderful!!!! I lovvvvve the title and the way it reflects in the poem. The imagery in your poem is beautiful, I love the way it flows together and the words fit perfectly... I could really live the moment :)

  • 13 years ago

    by lOsT sOuL

    This is a great poem..:) i loved it ..:) nice work .. willingness to be together..:) it's perfect it shows the love between 2 :) great work :) 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    Really good Job! Its really hard creating a poem with someone else and this one turned out great!
    Jenni is right! It does flow smoothly
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    This is a really heartfelt poem, I like positive poems like these, especially when they carry the emotions this poem did. I have to admit I can't tell what part has been written by who because this flowed really smoothly.

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