You're poems are brilliant and well done i like this poem and the rhymes are good well done love reading you''re poems :)

Cutetest part from the whole of it..... <3

"I'm looking forward to a happy ever after.
you, becoming my life,
and i,willingly your wife."

loved it :)

You guys did a really good job, she told me you guys were doing a collab and I was already expecting a great poem and for sure I didnt got dissapointed :) 5/5

This was really great piece.
Congrats on this Joseph,and keep writing these nice poems.

Wow though this is short i really loved it

How can I have someone so perfectly amazing,
making my heart beat faster then a flattering raven
- this is my favorite part but i truely loved the entire thing :) :) 5/5

This is a really heartfelt poem, I like positive poems like these, especially when they carry the emotions this poem did. I have to admit I can't tell what part has been written by who because this flowed really smoothly.

Really good Job! Its really hard creating a poem with someone else and this one turned out great!
Jenni is right! It does flow smoothly
5/5

This is a great poem..:) i loved it ..:) nice work .. willingness to be together..:) it's perfect it shows the love between 2 :) great work :) 5/5

Wonderful!!!! I lovvvvve the title and the way it reflects in the poem. The imagery in your poem is beautiful, I love the way it flows together and the words fit perfectly... I could really live the moment :)

This is soooo a vivid poem! great job!