I like this :).
Using break dancing to describe the feelings yall feel :).
Great Job <3
5/5

I feel the .'s spaced out the way they are, are a bit odd. It felt different to me, in a weird way lol. I understand PnQ doesn't let you space things the way you always want to or do any sort of formatting, though, so I understand. The breaks were definitely well placed, I think the emphasis on pausing, drawing out silence to get to the next lines were important and worked really well here.

You've written more great images here :) I like the whirl and hurl, but not using 'twirl'. ;)

Hey there you are inspired again, ha? ok I'll show you how to be inspired....AMAZING piece and maybe nominated I'll try to break some promises with some random members, lol....and yeah i wanted to say...mwa!