Like my Memories--collab with Rabea

Break my heart to
countless softened pieces
^^^
VERY unnecessary, Nana, Rabea.

The emotions were abducting!
but I gree with Myrynnn you should be careful of your word choice. ;)

and ehem ehem this is only for nana:
before i signed out the last time they were 158 now they are 162??? ok ....mnet7esab:P

Wow ... this was an amazing collaboration! I loved the opening stanza, it really engaged me as the reader.

I think that this stanza really spoke to me too:
"For I misshapen to
be a heavy ground that
carries on its shoulders
burdens of a house haunted by
memories that are to the slightest
wound, broken, shattered
and burnt."

I love the idea of this poem, and it was just so deep yet expressed simply and sweetly... you can tell that this 'person' is warning the person that might love them to beware of his/her fears and past memories... I really loved this collaboration. I really enjoyed it. I am a fan of both of your work and I think your styles meshed well together in this one.

Great job my friends :* <3

While you two did a superb job, from the harmonious order of each stanza and the emotions soaring freely as I read through, I however think that your word choice is somehow simple and the unnecessary repetition in some way made this piece a little obvious. But not to worry, collaboration is not an easy task to do , but you perfect it together as if two minds but with a single thought, and that's more than enough.

Amaaaaaaaaaazing piece of work ...i soooooo loved it..... <3

I sooo loved this you guys :) you should collab more often ..
I can honestly see pieces of both of you in this.
Great job.