Oh my gosh! This is awesome! There is a fabulous use of emotion, description, length, and story. I love the excellent flow! You are amazing, please dont stop writing. Great, no, mavelous job!

Oh my gosh! This is awesome! There is a fabulous use of emotion, description, length, and story. I love the excellent flow! You are amazing, please dont stop writing. Great, no, mavelous job!

Well that was sad :/