Since we broke up

by believeinlove87   Sep 9, 2011


The day you walked into my life,
my world stopped,
my heart started to race out of my chest,
you took my breath away,
finally i fell in love.

Eyes that hypnotized me,
touch that sent chills down my spine,
electricity flowed through out my body as we kissed,
fighting myself from saying i love you to soon,
instantly knowing you were the one.

My heart belonged to you,
a prisoner of your love,
becoming my entire world,
your smile lit me up brighter then the north star,
my prince charming,
the only one i loved.

The day you walked into my life,
experiencing love at first sight,
knowing as long as i was in your arms embrace,
nothing else mattered,
you became my everything,
my one & only,
the love of my life.

Months past since we broke up,
my love for you has dimmed,
the fire has faded,
no more shining brighter then a star,
you destroyed my heart,
the one i thought i could never live with out,
hurt me beyond repair,
saying my final goodbye,
i gave up on love.

- Just How i felt-

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  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I think this piece is amazing. When I am less tiered and more awake, I will come and leave a better comment I swear. Though I do love this piece

  • 13 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    Months past since we broke up,
    my love for you has dimmed,
    the fire has faded,
    no more shining brighter then a star,
    you destroyed my heart,
    the one i thought i could never live with out,
    hurt me beyond repair,
    saying my final goodbye,
    i gave up on love.

    Wooowwww... so deep and powerful! I loved every part of the poem! This stanza especially!! It is a sad ending but a truthful one! Sometimes people try to hold onto something that isn't there anymore!

    GOOD work!! :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Ugh girl u sooo know i relate and reading this just makes me wanna cry girl but if i wasn't so emotional this would blow me away and make me relate :) fantastic...awesome...great...i absoultely loved it :)

    Eyes that hypnotized me,
    touch that sent chills down my spine,
    electricity flowed through out my body as we kissed,
    fighting myself from saying i love you to soon,
    instantly knowing you were the one.
    - i think this is my favorite but the entire poem is my favorite i loved everything :) :) 5/5

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