Ugh girl u sooo know i relate and reading this just makes me wanna cry girl but if i wasn't so emotional this would blow me away and make me relate :) fantastic...awesome...great...i absoultely loved it :)

Eyes that hypnotized me,
touch that sent chills down my spine,
electricity flowed through out my body as we kissed,
fighting myself from saying i love you to soon,
instantly knowing you were the one.
- i think this is my favorite but the entire poem is my favorite i loved everything :) :) 5/5

Months past since we broke up,
my love for you has dimmed,
the fire has faded,
no more shining brighter then a star,
you destroyed my heart,
the one i thought i could never live with out,
hurt me beyond repair,
saying my final goodbye,
i gave up on love.

Wooowwww... so deep and powerful! I loved every part of the poem! This stanza especially!! It is a sad ending but a truthful one! Sometimes people try to hold onto something that isn't there anymore!

GOOD work!! :)

I think this piece is amazing. When I am less tiered and more awake, I will come and leave a better comment I swear. Though I do love this piece