by Lizza Tiedemann Sep 9, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
cyber love
I have feelings of love for the guy I see. |
by Jessie
I can feel the emotion in this poem.... But it felt like it was trapped behind the repetitive "I"'s and forced rhymes. Try writing without those and see what you come up with. aside from that, good description:) |
by lOsT sOuL
This poem is so strong. It shows your love towards him. i loved this . Nice work to expose your love . You have mixed you fear and love in such a nice way. Great work 5/5 |