by lOsT sOuL
This is really a sad poem.. but i love this.. poem full of true emotions and feelings.. which shows ur pain and ur hate towards him..:):) this is a great work ..:) i love this 5/5 :) |
by aanika R I P
"I haven't thought of you in a really long time |
Amazing(: |
by average thoughts
It luks like, kinda letter, but i liked it..5 from me too gal.. |
by Dave
Very good, very deep, I enjoyed it. |
by Burning Angel
I love it.. it explains some of the stuff i feel for an ex of mine.. he cheated on me with two of my best friends,then played us against each other..Your an amazing writer also :D |
Good stuff. As Jacob Queen said majestic is a positive thing, but it was a good read all the same. I've written a few with the whole "Okay I'm done with it" kind of vibes. Much easier said than done, sadly. |
by anonymous
I love your poems! 5/5 |
by BlueJay
Wow. Amazing piece, there is an excelleny example of personal style, and far too many different skills to praise you for, so instead I will comment on the basics. You have the emotion and pain down so well, and they really carry the piece. Your flow is far too basic, yet somehow it works for this piece. The final thing I will say about this piece is that I absolutely love it. Fabulous job |
by Chevalier des Fleurs
Another amazing and stunning write. Full of sadness and heartbreak, beautifully written. You inspire me to want to write in a similar style as you do. 5/5 Great job! |