Never ending delusions

by Dr sarat sonowal   Sep 9, 2011


The silent sidewalk I took
Led me to a place of turbulence
My head's spinning
With my heart pounding against my chest
Its the vibrations I feel
The never ending delusions
Faces fade
Voice diminishes
The circle is too concentric
It pulls me under
With the gravity
Of lightning's speed

Falling like a stone into a deep ocean
Everything I read before
Is undone with a silent fate
My mind opens into a new world
I create my own words
Wisdom I am searching for
Just lies ahead

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  • 11 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Wow, amazing work. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert

    There was a lot of great description here but no focal point for be centered it too. I kinda left me scratching my head. Wondering what were you try to tell me. Did you have a point to this poem? Plot121

    • 11 years ago

      by Dr sarat sonowal

      "there is a focal point but hidden", basically what i wrote here is about alcoholism,repentance and karma

    • 11 years ago

      by Dr sarat sonowal

      "there is a focal point but hidden", basically what i wrote here is about alcoholism,repentance and karma

    • 11 years ago

      by Dr sarat sonowal

      "there is a focal point but hidden", basically what i wrote here is about alcoholism,repentance and karma

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    Appericiated !!

  • 13 years ago

    by Dr sarat sonowal

    Thank u friend..glad u liked it

  • 13 years ago

    by L

    This awesome.. The wisdom that we are seeking lies ahead of us.. Pretty good. I enjoy it.

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