Comments : Never ending delusions

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Dark and enjoyable.
    You have made your mark in the society of dark poets lol
    Very good

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    This awesome.. The wisdom that we are seeking lies ahead of us.. Pretty good. I enjoy it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Dr sarat sonowal

    Thank u friend..glad u liked it

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    Appericiated !!

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert

    There was a lot of great description here but no focal point for be centered it too. I kinda left me scratching my head. Wondering what were you try to tell me. Did you have a point to this poem? Plot121

    • 11 years ago

      by Dr sarat sonowal

      "there is a focal point but hidden", basically what i wrote here is about alcoholism,repentance and karma

    • 11 years ago

      by Dr sarat sonowal

      "there is a focal point but hidden", basically what i wrote here is about alcoholism,repentance and karma

    • 11 years ago

      by Dr sarat sonowal

      "there is a focal point but hidden", basically what i wrote here is about alcoholism,repentance and karma

  • 11 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Wow, amazing work. 5/5