Stop being so quick to end us, this isn't a game

I'm trying to understand the situation can't you see

What about my pain and sadness, this affects me too
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very good poem very heartfelt it was fantastic :) 5/5

I agree with her(:.

Amazing poem. Love isn't a game, its a beautiful thing between 2 people, that is something you should cherish.
This poem pours emotion, flows perfectly & shows how much you care and that you don't want things to end, but only work out :)
5/5

I did like your personal approach to the age old problem of casting blame. I could not help but think of the pain I myself was in when I wrote Adam's Rib

Well done. The poem ended with a strong finish Love is not a game

Wow this is great, your feelings are obvious !! great work 5/5 :)

The poem is great. Just try adding some commas, periods and some question marks when you state a question. Aside from that is good.

"Why do you always put the blame on me?
I'm trying to understand the situation, can't you see? "

Wow, I totally know how this feels. But I've also been guilty of doing this. I can see both sides, but neither of them feel good. It had a very good flow and good word usage. All in all a great piece. 5/5