Love love this<3.
You could see everything playing out like it was me having the dream. The passion you felt poured through, the tears pouring out of your eyes you could see.
Amazing job.
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5/5

I really liked it. The wording was great and so was the flow. Thought the 1st stanza didn't seem to go with the others some how. Other then that it was great. it was also a good length.

gave it a 5/5

The vivid dream just sounded so realistic to the reader. Without the first 2 and the last 2 lines, it would have been difficult to make out that this was really a dream narration. I am glad you have the talent to put dreams in poetry so well. Simply beautiful.