Omg... wow i loved it started out sad and then i got happy at thee end...perfect fantastic poem and very heartfelt...i loved it :) :) 5/5 |
This is my favorite poem of yours :). |
This poem really held my attention without missing a beat |
by L
I like the title. |
by yogi73
Very open poem. probably your deepest. good job on this one! |
by No1ButMe
I liked how many emotions you could see through this. I saw so many as the story unfolded and that is a very amazing talent. Yes there were ups and downs but in the end you have become stronger and who you were meant to be. It should give more people hope, which is something we all need. Another amazing piece. Continue to do the right thing and become a stronger you. 5/5 |
by amanda
This was a really amazing poem. It held my interest the whole time. Great job! |
by Dave
Thank you i apreciate your feedback |