Ahhh! "I am the" overload! which sucks, because the descriptive words and thoughts in this poem were really good, but they were completely overpowered but the repetition. I think this would be a really good piece if you found some way to take out all the "I am"'s

maybe just

I am......

the Pirate, sailing the seas
the sharks, waiting the feast

You would still have a repetitive "The" but it would be much more subtle

I like the use of I am... being repeated I think it makes the poems flow effectively... I really like how you entwined the positives and negatives of imagination in this piece I find it really creative and well thought out!
You have greatly earned my 5/5 :)

Wow... i got a great picture in my mind of each and every one of those great job! and i loved the ending again 5/5 from me!

The description about the "Imagination" is cool..i like the way you write it in repetition...it makes me picture out all you have described as an imagination..nice one..keep writing",

This was great! I got chills near the end, and it all fits so perfectly together. It was wonderfully written and It kept my attention the whole time i was reading it! I loved it!

This is a beautiful, dark-tinted, and childlike, in a sense, piece. I like it. After the first line, I thought it would be more of a childlike poem, but it turned into a grown-up, darker imaginative write.

I am the adventurer, stealing the treasure
I am the cannibals, waiting in pleasure
I am the hero, defeating the troll
I am the parasite, drinking your soul

^^ I am a fan of your AA BB poetry. You seem to use it, and it works. It never sounds like it's forced or choking, and it all flows. This is something you really would hear comparisons of in poetry, and I think you are in a class of your own with writing like this. It's a new taste, and it's bitter - but I want more.

You have an outstanding way with imagery!

Wow....gets better and better......love it!

Wow....gets better and better......love it!

This is superb and dark indeed! Brilliant rhythm and rhyme scheme throughout.