Sleeplessness

Wow..now this is
Short
Simple
Beautiful
Well flowed
And catching..

D whole poem is a piece of art..but thr is a line whr u hv mentioned dt u hv bcm my lullaby and keeps me awake..wow so refreshing..keep on writing simple like dis..simple yt powerful.

This is the kind of excellent poetry. so shopt but say alot of words. it always happend to me in past. it made me sad.

My mind keeps telling we can
never be for one another, but
my heart refuses, it can't stop
falling in love with you.

Wow, I love this stanza. I know this all too well. The best decision, right decision, and hardest decision is hard to deal with. I wish you the best.

Keep smiling!! :)

This poem touched me. It reminds me of how I felt a few years ago when I liked someone who didn't like me back. I found this poem to be sweetly written yet it had that tinge of sadness to it too.

5/5

Ha ha diz topic u tchd iz d same wonderful painful yet d best possible thing we. Ppl experience lots of tymz... Last week itself it happnd 2 me as usual n I wrote a quote also on dat topic, n I posted it o'er here ystday...
Nyc 2 c a poem based on d subject... I lykd awl d lynz...

Luvly topic n wonderful write as eva....;) keep it up...;)