OH MY GOD..I AM INLOVE..WHEN I CHEER UP A LITTLE BIT I WILL COME AND COMMENT AND EXPLAIN WHY I LOVED THIS...JUST...OMG..YOU SHOULD KNOW THIS IS SUCH A REFRESHING READ.
A silhouette so jagged
it almost can't be seen
rough as sand
strong as sea
^^ this was just incredible I really liked your usage of words here!!
Ive been through what the character of this poem describes and I hated it. BUT! I absolutely loved your poem..I loved your word choice throughout the whole thing, but that stanza was my favorite.