Comments : Me and the Princess

  • 13 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    OH MY GOD..I AM INLOVE..WHEN I CHEER UP A LITTLE BIT I WILL COME AND COMMENT AND EXPLAIN WHY I LOVED THIS...JUST...OMG..YOU SHOULD KNOW THIS IS SUCH A REFRESHING READ.

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    A silhouette so jagged
    it almost can't be seen
    rough as sand
    strong as sea

    ^^ this was just incredible I really liked your usage of words here!!

    Ive been through what the character of this poem describes and I hated it. BUT! I absolutely loved your poem..I loved your word choice throughout the whole thing, but that stanza was my favorite.

    The last 2 lines, LOVED!!!
    Great write!