Good poem , strong emotion :) 5/5

I know this feeling, hating somebody so much!
Love this poem.
Each line is raw pure strong emotion, that gets deeper the more you read.
Not a thing i would change.
Love it
5/5

Wow, I sensed more hate than love in here.
May be a better title would be :
"From love to hate."

This is good. REALLY strong. I didn't pay attention to the category of the poem and it really surprised me as i was reading since it didn't even warn me about it. lol.
Just add some commas, periods and questions marks.

"Are you really that much of a cold hearted selfish ...
If so then I need to turn off my heart but where's the switch"

May be change it to
If so then I need to turn off my heart but tell me where is the switch.

Either way, it sounds good.
i like that sentence. Where is the switch?

Yeah There wasn't much love there, when I started i was going a different direction but the anger overwelmed me and took over i do love that title suggestion

WOW! This is amazing. The words pack a punch. I love the imagery you've created. I can see it all in my head. Nice flow, it didn't feel forced at all. It definitely feels real. I'm sorry you were hurt so badly. 5/5
ps I've been wanting to write a poem like this for weeks! A similar thing happened to me but I couldn't do it. You've done a wonderful job (:

WOW! This is amazing. The words pack a punch. I love the imagery you've created. I can see it all in my head. Nice flow, it didn't feel forced at all. It definitely feels real. I'm sorry you were hurt so badly. 5/5
ps I've been wanting to write a poem like this for weeks! A similar thing happened to me but I couldn't do it. You've done a wonderful job (:

Wow, lots of rage... well, this isn't my favorite piece although venting is always good. I know I've thought about killing people and I've written about it. But my problem with this piece is I want to know what changed about her, what did you go through to make you so angry. Was it over time or was it sudden? With this piece I just find myself wanting to know more. I want some kid of like back-story or something. But that's just my opinion on the piece.

This was a really good poem too! I can feel the emotions, it really moved me. Amazing job!