by Brittany C
I liked it. But I think that it should be split up into stanzas. It would help the flow which seemed to be a little off to me. Other then that it was good. |
Beautiful poem<3 |
by Dave
Very nice poem, good job like always |
by average thoughts
Yeah he will find u ,,dont worry..and for now ,,5/5 |
by aanika R I P
Yup this thought sometimes do screw up that you have no one to see you around, to take care of you.....however others have love in their lives |