Bring me to life (Acrostic)

by The Poet Behind The Poems   Sep 10, 2011


Bring me to life
Revive my dead heart
I can't hear my own voice
Nothing is all I see
Gathering insects and rot
My skin decaying
Every bone brittle
Teeth corroding
Oesophagus disappearing
Life is now in the past
I don't have a future
Forever in the ground
Eternity in a box

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  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is sad yet cold and chilling. As I read it
    I could imagine a person locked inside a box and buried six feet under struggling to be heard! A chilling read!

  • 13 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Now that is really sad and perfect :-) Every word was penned with sadness and enjoyable to read

    Connie
    xx

  • 13 years ago

    by Amreen

    This poem has a great meaning to it...!I mean it is so original and shows the eagerness of a dead body to be out of the coffin and to lead a life as normal...

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Loved this(:.
    Every word shows such strong imagery as you watch it the whole way reading it :).
    Great job
    (:
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by The Queen

    The title really fits well with the poem. You have penned this acrostic very well with much thought and an excellent word choice,the flow is perfect, too and not to mention not a single line seemed force. You astound me, the way you managed to capture the essense of the song.

    Well done!

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