These short sentences make your poem flow really well. I'd prefer it even more though if you used some punctuation. I have to admit that the idea is quite common though but you managed to write your own kind of poem. I like the fact that this is an acrostic. :P

I remenber when you were writing this and how I loved it, now that Ive read it again I love it even more :)

The title really fits well with the poem. You have penned this acrostic very well with much thought and an excellent word choice,the flow is perfect, too and not to mention not a single line seemed force. You astound me, the way you managed to capture the essense of the song.

Well done!

Loved this(:.
Every word shows such strong imagery as you watch it the whole way reading it :).
Great job
(:
5/5

This poem has a great meaning to it...!I mean it is so original and shows the eagerness of a dead body to be out of the coffin and to lead a life as normal...

Now that is really sad and perfect :-) Every word was penned with sadness and enjoyable to read

Connie
xx

This is sad yet cold and chilling. As I read it
I could imagine a person locked inside a box and buried six feet under struggling to be heard! A chilling read!