Satan Drug
by john Sep 10, 2011
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Satan drug seeks in/ demons pin/ eyes roll back/ world turns black/ in a trance/ blood stain lips/ tears slowly drips/ victim rape/ no pain/ no gain/ upon a rusty amber blade/ hell shed death/ deadly kiss/ poison seeks in/ laughter twist upon an angry vampire |
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13 years ago
by Jenni
I think this poem is well written, flows well and I like the rhymes. I have to admit that I do not like the way you presented it though because it is somewhat irritating. It'd be easier if you broke the lines and simply put the verses into a new one. Your words were well chosen and they set a nice imagery though.
