STOP IT, OK????
I BEG YOU TO STOP IT!

WHAT THE HELL HAVE YOU DONE TO MY HEART???

i have just stopped crying....i swear that i went to my room and cried and after i wiped my tears and decided to be happy again.....i opened pnq to see submitted a new poem that ....made me cry all over again...i dont blame you...no...i blame god for creating such a miracle.

this was sad
VERY damn sad...what else should i aim for??

Yaki, this is beyond sad, beyond magnificent, the way you've described this made me wonder exactly what you've been though, it took my minds to places, it's easy to say that in this piece you are easily compared to an artist painting a picture, and although the picture here was a sad one, it was filled with emotions, straight from your heart, a 5/5
and a nomination tommrow. God bless you
on a side note i hope that everything is ok =-)
because this was powerful beyond measure.

Yaki, this is beyond sad, beyond magnificent, the way you've described this made me wonder exactly what you've been though, it took my minds to places, it's easy to say that in this piece you are easily compared to an artist painting a picture, and although the picture here was a sad one, it was filled with emotions, straight from your heart, a 5/5
and a nomination tommrow. God bless you
on a side note i hope that everything is ok =-)
because this was powerful beyond measure.

Lovely and witty. Well fashioned words with pictures well painted. Good poem! They shall surely pass!!