I Feel As If I'm Bleeding Out

by Captain HC   Sep 10, 2011


I sense her when shes around, I get dizzy, lightheaded almost as if I had drowned.

I cannot maneuver quickly as if I had weighted my ankles, and she speaks to me.

My heart flutters then i feel as if I've had a heart attack.

Her words like gold and her hair like that of a goddess, I feel as if she could be Venus sent to charm me.

Sometimes, I believe her eyes hold a set of vast luminous blue seas, teeming with the fears I hold of the deep.

Sometimes, I feel as if I am bleeding out while around her, even more when she touches my skin. She could be the one.

The last one, the only one, all I live, breathe, and die for.

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  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, this is awesome!! I love the uses of imagery, and comparisons. You have an excellent word choice. There is a flow, which is nice. All in all, I think you have done an amazing job.