by Captain HC Sep 10, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
new love
I sense her when shes around, I get dizzy, lightheaded almost as if I had drowned. |
by BlueJay
Wow, this is awesome!! I love the uses of imagery, and comparisons. You have an excellent word choice. There is a flow, which is nice. All in all, I think you have done an amazing job. |