Comments : Taking my chances

  • 13 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    "the sands of time fill the hour glass in earnest
    so does my days upon this earth flies.
    I'm no friend of loneliness for
    I find no comfort in solitude."
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    I think your work is wonderful, I love the stories it tells. If you would punctuate and clean it up just a bit, it would be marvelous in content.

    The above stanza was my favorite, I think it touched the heart of your poem
    Excellent Keep up the good works

    Connie