Hostage of Your Look

It's a dfficult situation to be infatuated with someone that doesn't care. I like your clever wording and effectiveness of the poem.

Very well written! I enjoyed the form of the poem. It was sad, sweet and had rhythm. 5/5

mandy :)

I think you did a really good job capturing the sense of frustration and sadness with this poem.

Amazing poem so true

Hello,
so very glad to hear you are back :)...an excellent job as always....