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by Lizza Tiedemann   Sep 11, 2011


I saw a picture today
That made me think of you
Bet we had a minute
To think about what we could do
I know we got some years
But the visual is oh so clear and
I saw a lady with a bell hanging on her face
And what must have been a dad giving her away
All I could do is smile
And thank god that you're mine now

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  • 12 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Very nicely written poem :)

    all the best and take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Reaper

    Beautiful!!! :) 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    If I'm not mistaken, diz iz ur 1st poem I m readin.. Yupp u hav kept it short ,yet sweet, cute, nyc1.... Keep it up...:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    This is a really well written poem, I like your choice of words and it is really relateable. I think that it flows well and has a good length.

  • 13 years ago

    by Georgia

    Aw it cute and sweet :}

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